The Great American
                Novel Act 1:
                the danger Act 2: rising action Act 3: the ball Act 4: crisis Act 5: triumph the Franklinverse part 2, act 1:
                the new danger

Sue's story, in her own words
always wanted a normal family


Age 31:Duty 32:Namor 33:Disliked 34:Father 35:Wedding
36:Galactus 37:Sidelined 38:Franklin 39:Agatha 40:Divorce?
41:Enough 42:Scratch 43:Hell 44:Peace 45: Future

Overview
Susan Storm never had a proper childhood. Her mother died when she was young, her father blamed himself, turned to drink, and ended up in jail. As a teenager Sue had to raise her "brother" alone. When he finally grew old enough to look after himself, a new and greater responsibility appeared: to protect the world, despite being almost powerless. This is Sue's story.

Show, don't tell
Sue is intensely private, and works by emotion rather than calculating logic. We see her heart from her actions more than her words.


Year 1: Duty

age 31
(1961, FF1)

Summary

In Fantastic Four issue 1 we meet Sue for the first time. Every theme of her life is contained in this first issue:

Details:

All Sue ever wanted was to spend some time on herself. But duty always comes first.

Sue

She is used to getting things done.

Sue

She is brave, and expects bravery in others.

Sue

Like I said, she is used to getting things done.
Sue

She gained the power of invisibility, reflecting her desire for privacy.

As a power it was little help against the Mole Man, who was used to living in the dark. Which made her the bravest of all.

Here she is ready to jump down a bottomless pit to save the others.

Sue

The power means she has a new family and new set of duties: to do anything, at any time, for any person. When will she ever get time to herself?

In general, Sue's role appears to be invisible: she tends to be in the background, saying little. But watch carefully. She sees things, she guides everything.

Sue

She wants the team to get along, and thinks everyone should accept their duty as she does. But doesn't yet realize the scale of what Ben has lost: his identity, everything he worked for his whole life, and his chance to win her love.

Sue

Sue is about to learn more compassion the hard way. But unlike the others she is a fast learner.



Year 2: Namor

age 32
(1962, FF2-9)

Summary:

Here we get to know Sue as a person. She is a woman who gets things done, living in a sexist world. but this year her life is turned upside down a second time, by the return of Namor. Suddenly nothing is simple any more.

Details:

None of them can appreciate the depth of what Ben has lost, and his misery threatens to tear the new family apart.

Sue

Like I said, Sue is a woman who gets things done.

Sue

She slowly begins to understand Ben's bitterness, but it will take time.

Sue

She is feisty and physical.

Sue

At this time the team is trying to keep a low profile, but Sue knows that hiding is impossible, and they need a public face.

Sue always has a better grasp of the longer term, and feels like the only adult in the team, playing nursemaid to the boys.

Sue

At this point there is tension between the boys and the authorities (because Reed hijacked a rocket, Johnny destroyed planes, and Ben hates everyone).

The boys think they should do everything alone (male pride), but Sue always thinks of alliances with others: they must involve the police commissioner.

Sue

Sue's confidence is high. While the Boys wonder what to do and stand around bickering, Sue takes action.

Sue

But suddenly her world is turned upside down for the second time in a year: she meets Namor.

Why does Namor, ruler of over half the planet, immediately ask to marry her?

Sue

This is our second clue to a deeper hidden story. 

Sus is the one with the plan, and Sue has to persuade the others.

Again, Sue is the bravest. She climbs outside, forty stories up, and enters the lion's den.

Sue

She save the boys who are helpless without her. Yet she is the one with virtually no power.

She is the first to defeat Dr Doom: a theme we will see again and again.

Sue

But all this time Namor is on her mind. Sue is not an immature teenager: for her to feel so deeply for Namor suggests there is more to this story.

Johnny however is an immature teenager, and is afraid Namor will take away his mother figure.

Sue

We gradually see a second clue to Sue's secret:

She hides her age, and likes to appear to be in her early 20s, yet she acts much older.

Sue

She understands Namor deeply. The others cannot understand it, but somehow she knows him far better than they do.

SueSue

Sue is the wisest team member. Reed is a genius at physics, but lacks Sue's social intelligence.

Sue

And while the boys are sometimes quick to give up, Sue is quick with a solution, putting her life on the line.

Sue

She always thinks ahead. So does Reed, but only when it involves physics, and his plans can be ethically questionable.

Sue

Meeting Namor has shaken her. When she decided on uniforms she wanted to be a public figure, but now she is not so sure.

Sue

And while she is generally the most mature, she is human and not perfect. Here her lack of appreciation for Ben borders on cruelty: she hurts his feelings and then stands by while he is insulted, only reacting when she feels insulted herself.

Sue

She slowly learns the depths of Ben's pain and her compassion grows at the same time. Here she begins to know what it is to be utterly helpless.
Sue

But in general she is the first to see smother person's point of view.
Sue

And she has a confident and gentle sense of humor.

Sue

And the most curiosity (outside of Reed's specialty, physics)

Sue

But still Namor is on her mind., Finally they meet and talk.

Sue

We learn that she was seriously considering his marriage proposal. But she needs a man she can trust.

Sue

And even though Namor is far more powerful, with a host of abilities, her mind is more resourceful.

Sue

Again and again she shows that she is the mature one who can see both sides of an argument, choose the best action and act proportionately.

As for Namor, his tragedy will become more poignant as we learn more of his and Sue's past.

Sue

But first Sue must take another emotional body blow: when she learns that many people don't like her.




Year 3: Sue learns she is disliked

age 33
(1963, FF10-21)

Summary:

Until now, Sue has been strong and capable, but also a little cold. She was upper class, beautiful and highly capable, and dealt a tough hand by fate. So she didn't always have sympathy for those who didn't have her high standards. This was seem most clearly with her attitude to Ben. But this year everything changed. She discovered that a lot of people didn't like her. She also finally realized the depths of Ben's misery. She also saw that Reed can make progress emotionally, whereas Namor (the exciting bad boy) came with a lot of serious baggage. So nobody is  perfect, not even herself.

So Sue matured as a person, and gained her greatest powers: deep compassion and intuition. She saw Reed in a new light, and was ready to accept a life with him. She was happy at last.

Details:

Sue worries about Reed. He pushes himself too hard. This will become a far more serious problem in future years.

Sue

Like many women she has to avoid creepy men.

Sue

Reed just assumed they would be married one day, but never did anything to earn that love.

Sue

The others just see conflict, Sue just wants to understand.

Sue

Again and again she puts herself in deadly danger, despite being the only one without protection.

Sue

She needs to understand

Sue

Reed just wants to get rid of the problem but Sue feels compassion. Because of her compassion the Impossible Man will one day come back to save the world.

Sue

Sue is growing ever more compassionate, as her experience increases.

Sue

But she still values her independence. Eventually she will sacrifice this to Reed... for a time.

Sue

It's been two years now since Ben changed, and finally Sue understands. She has matured as well. No more attacking him. From now on her weapon is love.

Sue
Sue

We finally learn of her childhood. But why is it painful to her? It clearly involves her decision of whether to marry Reed, but why should her childhood in particular be painful? This is another big clue to her secret.

Sue

And now the emotional body blow. Despite all her attempts to do the right thing, to show compassion, to reach out to others... she gets hate mail.

Putting it all together we begin to see her loneliness. Namor loves her but is arrogant. Reed loves her but lacks emotional skills. Ben loves her but has his own issues, plus this would break Reed's heart. And she has to stay with the team: it's her family, her duty. Is she doomed to always be a lonely mother figure, driven by duty?

Sue


She is genuinely shocked that they even remembered her birthday. This is well beyond what she has come to expect of them. It shows her loneliness: she need friends, people who understand, not people for whom simply remembering their best friend's birthday is an achievement.


Sue

because the fact is: these men are incredibly sexist and condescending and don't even realize it.

Sue

Yet some people do notice her compassion. The people of true ability and wisdom, like the Watcher. As a non violent advanced being her compassion for her enemies must have touched his heart.

Sue

Sue's deepening maturity leads to the development of her greatest power: her intuition. From this point on her intuition will never be wrong.

Sue

Her inner peace only increases her outward beauty. As the team's fame increases it's Sue that everyone wants.

Sue

Yet still the men around her are emotionally stunted chauvinists.

Sue

But karma is real. Reed wants Sue more than anything, yet he cannot win her heart and lacks the emotional insight to know why.

Sue

It breaks her heart. And so the loneliness returns. She thinks again of Namor. He can be arrogant and impulsive, but he understands passion.

Sue

And so they arrange a secret meeting

Sue

But Namor is so driven by emotion that he is not always responsible for his actions. Sometimes she finds himself led by others. So Sue is torn: does she go with the man who is all brain and lacking emotion or the one who is all emotion but sometimes lacks brain?

Sue

So once again she must return to her duty with Reed. but look at her face; she is weary.

Namor is also a tragic character. he has no home no friends. But he is a man of action. He will not mope or complain, he will find his people!

Sue
Back home Sue despairs of the destructive, childlike men around her

Sue

It finally gets through to Reed: maybe he should do something nice for her? Well done Reed! At last!

Sue

Namor has found his people. He is past his unstable phase and invites Sue once again. But Reed's efforts came just in time. Maybe there is hope for the bookworm yet.

Sue

Reed feels powerless, but if he can keep up his good behavior he will win Sue's heart. They are destined to be together.

Sue

Because although he lacks social skills. Reed does not lack courage, and his heart is pure.

Sue

Now confident, Namor begins to show his true priorities: a wife will always come second to his job.

Sue

Sue also learns that she would always be an outsider and secretly hated among Namor's people. And it almost costs her life.

Sue


Sue

Sue sees Reed in a new light. She makes her decision.

Sue

While Namor's tragedy is absolute. As half human and half Atlantean, living under the sea but in love with a girl he can never have, he is the loneliest of all.

Sue

Sue is making a very big decision. Her place to think is always the hairdresser. Where she can just sit and be pampered, and her mind is free.

But even here she is always a slave to duty.

Sue

So she tries to get away. She takes a job as an actress.

Sue

She tries movies. But a job isn't what she needs. What she really needs is peace and quiet.

Sue

Just as she thinks she has settled on Reed, she is reminded that other men do exist: strong, handsome men with social skills.

Sue

So she finds a little time for herself. She turns her work into a hobby, finding an excuse to be with perfume and pets.

Sue

Relaxing is good for the brain and soul. Now Sue is starting to feel good. Yes, she can live like this. Life with Reed will be OK. The new more relaxed Sue is now able to focus on other things. 

She still compares the other team members to children, with herself as mother, but in a loving way.

Sue

Sue is not just emotionally intelligent. She can sometimes solve a scientific problem before Reed does.

Sue

Now at her peak, Sue once again defeats their most capable enemy, Doctor Doom

Sue

her fame and confidence grows. Compare this scene to the earlier one where she was afraid to attend a social function.

Sue

Once again she defeats Doctor Doom. This is getting to be a habit! And note that confidence leads to humility: she credits her success to Reed, whereas it is clearly all her idea.

Sue

Reed is sometimes confused and vulnerable, but Sue is in charge of the situation.

Sue

With Sue guiding things, Reed is doing well! He even takes her on a second date!

Sue

And takes her out shopping. Reed, you're learning! But it is clear that Sue is in charge: Reed would never do this on his own.

Sue

And through it all Sue is always the bravest...

Sue

...despite having no defenses of her own and facing murderous super powered enemies.

Sue

and despite the men around her being less reliable

Sue

Because Sue cares. She takes her work and the happiness of those around her very, very personally.

Sue

Her less-violent methods are more successful. here for example she thinks the alien ball does not fight because it cannot see her, but in reality it is from the Watcher: he can easily see her, but he belies in non-violence. Sue succeeds where the others fail because she is more gentle.

Sue

And still she has to persuade Reed to let her do things her way. As Reed's feelings toward her grow he becomes more protective, and in the future this will become stifling.

Sue

Twice now Sue has been able to spend a little time on herself. Things are looking up! We are glimpsing the childhood she never had!

in the future

And so ends Sue's year of confidence. But we end with another clue to her secret. When (in effect) drugged, Sue and Johnny are free to speak their darkest thoughts. What they say is interesting. Sue resents Johnny as an "incorrigible little brat" meaning he literally will not change (incorrigible) from being a child on her apron strings (the literal meaning of "brat"). Sue's duty is to raise Johnny and she wanted to be free by now. meanwhile, Johnny's darkest thought are that Sue is a phony. Once again this is a clue to the secret that will be revealed near the end.

in the future





Year 4: The death of her father

age 34
(1964, FF22-33)

Summary:

This year is the best and worst year of Sue's life (until the very end). She finally sorts out her life and reaches her greatest potential, on the eve of her greatest tragedy.

Details:

Note the joy in her face, her playful posture, and using Reed's machines as a hairdo: hair styling represents Sue having time to herself. Combining high tech and hair shows us she is finally complete.

Sue

Everyone notices her ability to make force fields, but historically this is trivial: her compassion and intuition, developed in the previous year, are her real powers. Sue uses love, not force.

Sue

Her happiness is complete. (Which means, this being a novel, that a tragedy will happen before the year is out.)

Sue

Sue may be happy now, but she still considers the boys to be roughnecks who just wreck things.

Sue


And while she love and respects Reed (and nobody doubts his heroism or scientific skill) she still sees his weakness as a leader


Sue


Unfortunately, the other men behave... like children.

Sue

And why? Because Reed likes to treat them like children.

Sue

The only person who has a right to treat anyone like a child is Sue to Johnny, because she raised him.

Sue

Incidentally, note that Sue's power is much harder to control than the others, hence it took years to master. it almost certainly relies on accurately visualizing every aspect of a shape. This reflects Sue's ability to grasp every aspect of a problem (including wider social and internal emotional aspects) whereas the boys see problems in simplistic terms (e.g. every problem just requires force). The next interaction illustrates this. Reed is arrogant, whereas Sue is humble. Though Reed's behavior was wrong his reasons were correct. Sue can admit this, whereas Reed will almost never admit he was wrong.

Sue

Oh and by the way, Sue defeats Doom yet again. You want Doom defeated? Call Sue. Doom is a symbol of all their problems, so it is is important to the message of the novel that Sue must usually be the one to defeat him. And the boys, being sexist, can never admit it.

Sue

You can tell Sue is doing a lot of thinking. Reed has just belittled Ben again, and the car almost crashed (a symbol of the team's dysfunction), and her first thought is of her hair. She is still getting used to the idea that Reed is The One. But she still doesn't feel it in her heart. So the beauty salon is always where she goes to think, her refuge from the life of danger and duty.

Sue

She tries to be romantic, talking of wishes and shooting stars 9the ideal opportunity to say something loving), but Reed is slipping back to his old ways of only caring for his work.


Sue

Drugged again, we see her inner fears. Is Reed's coldness because he doesn't really love her? (In reality his poor social skills are not because he secretly loves someone else, but are probably due to autism, but these things were seldom diagnosed in the 1960s)


Sue

Her fears are confirmed when Reed is as sexist as ever. She knows in her head that he is the best choice for husband, but how must it feel in her heart?

Sue

She will just have to take charge. Sue is not the kind of person to feel sorry for herself. If there is a problem she takes charge and she solves it.

Sue


And boy, can she take charge. here she is defeating Dr Doom single handedly yet again (until Reed bursts in and used Doom's own drug against him)

Sue

The important thing is that she is now certain. her confidence just accentuates her beauty: now she shines. The press cannot get enough of her, and they ignore the others.

Sue

Her methods are non-violent.

Sue

And for the first time she thinks she might lose Reed. And she realizes how much she loves him. Before this she knew in her mind that he was "the one". Now at last she feels it with all her heart.

"I never realized how much I love you... need you"

Sue


The dark days are over. The doubt is over. Sue loves Reed. Reed really does love Sue. He's just... Reed. So has a hard time expressing himself outside of science. But as his connection with the regular world he needs her more than she knows.

love

And finally, after two years, he plans to buy a ring. Though he won't summon up the courage to offer it for another eight months!  See the silly grin on his face, how he takes Sue literally, and how how Ben and Johnny are far ahead of him socially. I tell you, I am diagnosed autistic, and Reed is one of us.

ring

Namor can't stand it: his loneliness, his despair at losing the woman he believes is his soul mate, the only woman who understands him.

Namor

But it gives Reed a chance to finally snap and prove that yes, he does have feelings!

Reed

And in the battle Sue realizes that Johnny is not a kid any more: he doesn't need her 24/7: she can be free at last!

johnny

They barely escape with their lives. Sue is emotionally battered and exhausted, with so many powerful emotions in turmoil. But Reed has no idea of timing. Literally seconds after Sue pours her heart out, while the team is still trying to escape, Reed wants it all explained.

timing

And then Ben says this, and it's the only clue Reed has. It's all too much for him to process: he can't cope with more.

confusing

He's just really, really bad at processing relationships

end

Autism is like that. I do so feel for him.

But deep down they know it's going to be OK. Reed can't discuss feelings, but he is smart enough to take Sue on holiday again, even if he does get lost. Yet it serves to relieve the tension. They* end up grinning - probably the only time we will ever see Sue grin.

* Apart from Ben, but that's a whole other story.

happy

Make the most of that happiness, Sue: you are about to plunge from your happiest moment to the saddest.*
* Until the final horrors of act 4, but that's a long way away.

She sees the day's paper and the bottom falls out of her world

the paper

(And note that Reed has the same deep insecurity that Sue had, revealed when she was drugged)

What could Sue have read? it was her father. And we finally begin to learn about Sue's childhood.

The news makes it hard for Sue to function.
distracted

childhood
Presumably Sue's fame shook him out of his depression, He escaped to see her.

(Note that Sue's hair style changed between hearing of her father and talking of her childhood. This indicates a visit to the salon, she really needed time to think.)

She is distracted throughout the next conflict, and ends up badly injured.
(Incidentally, this showing that Sue was always right to be the one cautious: these adventures are seriously dangerous.)

So in a Shakespearian tragic twist, her father's inability to cope with tragedy led to his daughter's tragic shildhood, which led to her being unable to cope with the news: his tragedy thus led to her tragedy

father
So rather than being free, her father was trapped by fate, as a result of his own past. Superficially this might look cheesy, cliched or unrealistic, but look closer, and imagine yourself in their situations. Consider the emotional pain at every stage, and it could not have ended in any other way. It's powerful stuff.
recaptured

Sue is emotionally unabe to function, and the team's greatest enemies take advantage of that. Reed does not understand emotions like Sue does, he can't see why she can't just snap out of it.
Sue
So only sees one choice. To resign. To leave the team, which effectively means losing Reed, losing everything she dreamed of. For all her life Sue has hidden, trapped by duty. For the past few months she finally thought she could be happy, and it was all a cruel illusion.
give up
And now we finally see why Sue needs Reed. Her extreme feminism needs his extreme masculinity. Reed's greatest weakness - his emotional coldness, his obsessive single mindedness, becomes his greatest strength. With Sue and Johnny unable to function, and Ben not knowing what to do, only Reed can save them.
family
So Reed discovers the truth and saves the day... except he doesn't. Reed finds it hard to explain things, so does not tell Sue that somebody is impersonating their father. He also does not tell her his sucpicion that her father's body will be booby trapped. If only Reed had been able to share, Sue could have been less frantic. Had she known this, and thought clearly, she could have encased the booby trap in an invisible forcefield. The super-skrul appeared in FF 18, before Sue developed force field powers, so the Skrulls probaby did not have a clear iddea of her new powers. She could have saved him.
secrecy
Or could she have saved him? Her emotions in this case did not let her function, and only Reed let them get as far as they did. Sue is imperfect. Reed is imperfect. Bad things happen. They are maturing, they are learning reality the hard way.

end

This, not the rocket flight, not meeting Namor, is the defining moment in Sue Storm's life.





Next: the wedding



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